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*Mother:Rianne? | *Mother:Rianne? | ||
*Woman: Janneke? That will match the drawings on the wall, but I can of course make fake ones.(Let a child draw and write something with 'for the sweetest dad an than her name Louise) | *Woman: Janneke? That will match the drawings on the wall, but I can of course make fake ones.(Let a child draw and write something with 'for the sweetest dad' an than her name Louise) | ||
I think her | I think I will call her Louise. | ||
==Story== | ==Story== | ||
Revision as of 13:59, 17 April 2012
Script
History and relation to the house explained
The house
- It is the house where she grew up, her parents got divorced and her lived until he died, alone.
- It is part of the inheritance.
- She hasn't been there for a while, doesn't want to be there, but has to.
History
What I think that happened is that she was brought up in a warm and protective family. But a disaster happened which made her mother pack her things and leave ( Him hitting her, or cheating on her)
This bad memory overrules all the other memories and has influenced how she remembers her father.
Her and her mother left when she was very young, to young to understand what really happened. She never wanted to return to her father, couldn't forgive him for what he did.
Maybe her mother made it worse by telling mean things about him, that she wasn't wanted by her father, that it was a good thing that they left him.
The woman believed her mother so strongly and never doubt the reality of her stories.
When she enters the house she expect to be confronted by the bad memories which in the beginning she is, but finds that there are a lot of good ones preserved in the house.
personality
- Father:Kees
- Mother:Rianne?
- Woman: Janneke? That will match the drawings on the wall, but I can of course make fake ones.(Let a child draw and write something with 'for the sweetest dad' an than her name Louise)
I think I will call her Louise.
Story
conversation between me and Karin
me:
Het gaat over een vrouw door het huis van haar opa ( of ouders. Dat weet ik nog niet) loopt en achtervolgd wordt door herinneringen. Deze verschijnen op de ramen en spiegels en ze is er eerst nog niet bewust van. Op de slaapkamer ziet ze een herinnering op het raam verschijnen, deze is niet leuk en ze probeert hem uit te wissen of ge veranderen. Dit lukt niet, en dus pakt ze het raam beet en houd hem voor zich. Nu kijken we over haar schouders mee en zien de herinneringen verschijnen. Zo loopt ze door het huis. Op zoek naar een fijne herinnering. De herinneringen zijn vaak niet fijn. Misschien gooig ze dingen kapot die haar slechte herinneringen brengen. Spullen waar fijne herinneringen aan zitten stopt ze in een tas/ koffer. Ik weetnog niet precies hoe het eindigd, maar het kan zijn dat ze wegloopt en het raam achterlaat en dat je dan een bordje te koop ziet staan.
karin:
Goed verhaal! Maar zomaar losse herinneringen bedenken is lastig als je het verhaal nog niet rond hebt. Wie is deze vrouw, wat was haar vader voor man, wat voor vrouw was haar moeder, had ze broers en zussen, waren ze arm, gelovig, streng, dom of juist veeleisend? Als je de personages kent komen de herinneringen denk ik vanzelf. x
inspiration
quotes about the past ( very cheesy, but fun to read the different point of views )
birds against the window
bird repeatedly flying against the window
bird 2 bird 3 bird 3 slow motion
turn of the sound by this one, pretty annoying.