BetterExperience
On this page I'm writing down my thoughts about my graduation from the last two weeks. They are an attempt to get at a better user experience ;)
Critique
There were some doubts in the teachers team about the project. I'll quickly summarise what I got from their critiques:
- It's doubtful whether Cookie Monster and Miss Piggy are the right characters
- The project should stir up a strong emotion like a shock about what the browser is doing
- The project should stay closer to reality and reveal which scripts are at work
- There is a danger that I'm pointing my finger at the user saying: "bad user!"
Google language
In the extension of staying closer to reality I tried to construct my characters from language only found at Google privacy pages, terms of services and the language they use in their services. This resulted in the following text:
I've kept all the footnote references intact as to give an idea of where I've cut in the texts...
(A and B will address the audience unless stated otherwise) A (important) At Google, we are keenly aware of the trust you place in us and our responsibility to protect your privacy.1 B (enthusiastic) Yada, yada! A As part of this responsibility, we let you know what information we collect when you use our2 web properties.3 B (serious) Yada A We may use a range of information […] to provide you with advertising […] including cookies4, Cookies can be used to store data about the user's computer or5 IP addresses6. Every computer connected to the Internet is assigned a unique number known as an (IP) address.7 A We do not use your email address […] to send commercial or marketing messages8 B (strongly) Yada yada! A (strongly as well) Absolutely not9 A We provide information10, including IP addresses11, to help copyright holders manage their intellectual property online. B (towards A) Yada? A (towards B, hesitant) Absolutely12 (reassuring) [but] it's not possible to determine your identity solely based on your IP-address B (relieved) Yada! A We provide13 IP-addresses … (hesitant) and usernames14 B (towards A, shocked) Yada! A [And] cookies15 B (towards A, mad) Yada yada yada yada yada yada yada yada!!!! (A flees from the scene followed by B in pursuit) A (while fleeing, panicked) Don't misuse [us]16 B Yada yada yada yada yada yada!!!! (A returns) A (quickly, under pressure) Our focus remains on providing you with the best possible […] experience and we continue to be committed to protecting your privacy17 (A runs of again towards the other side, B is still chasing) B Yada yada yada yada yada!!!!