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There's no recording. It only exists in the cave. | There's no recording. It only exists in the cave. | ||
There's no recording. It's in the cave. | There's no recording. It's in the cave. | ||
I left them in the cave. | |||
it = should refer to moment, not recording. them = cave/cage. | |||
implied that this experience can't leave the cave. it's only there. |
Revision as of 23:40, 22 January 2012
I'm hiding in a cave With a man with dark hair His appearance flickers, in motion Shape shifting between v and g Cave and Cage Nick, Nicolas, and John the singer, the actor, the artist (and back again) Their faces blend together Three tongues moving at jet speed Six eyes working with thirty-six teeth Some nose hair, saliva, and too many feet For their dirty, thirty fingers to eat A unibrow In unison The saddest, most tranquil, exciting, and all-encompassing live radio composition car chase kissing scene concert unfolds as they perform movies, movements, songs, poems, and the improvised holes between them. There's no recording. I left it in the cave.
alternate endings
There's no recording. It only exists in the cave. There's no recording. It's in the cave. I left them in the cave.
it = should refer to moment, not recording. them = cave/cage. implied that this experience can't leave the cave. it's only there.