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Bree, discovery of: - journal from Leah - this New Life (Dante) from Amelia - recipe books | Bree, discovery of: - journal from Leah - this New Life (Dante) from Amelia - recipe books | ||
<s> | <s>Maguey | ||
LOCATION: de Hortus, Amsterdam - see also [[Jujube/memoir]]</s> | LOCATION: de Hortus, Amsterdam - see also [[Jujube/memoir]]</s> | ||
== haircut == | |||
Two characters: M & J. | Two characters: M & J. | ||
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== Going home from home == | |||
J stands in an empty space and recalls the items from her current living room shelf. | <s>J stands in an empty space and recalls the items from her current living room shelf.</s> | ||
I decided to rent an apartment for a few days in the Hague, to have a meaningful birthday and pass some time with intention. | |||
==production notes== | ==production notes== |
Revision as of 15:59, 26 September 2019
living rooms
The Hague
did you remember
Follow the protagonist to places where she takes photography with a 35mm.
What does she want to remember?
Things of beauty and intrigue:
- winding staircases near Kino
- butterflies
- what are the moments you associate beauty with?
Things with friends -- iconic human connection?
- elaborate dinners
- picnic, smiles
- beach, water, kite
Portrait?
- photo studio
Close-ups:
- looking
- framing
- focus? -- POV?
End scene:
She goes to the darkroom.
Screen goes dark, sound of loading film
Developing (all steps)
When the images emerge:
They are blank.
End scene alternative:
She goes to a vast space.
It's just the camera and her now.
Shots of her taking off the camera.
Shots of her opening the camera.
It's empty.
homemaking
LOCATION: fabric station, Bree
Bree, discovery of: - journal from Leah - this New Life (Dante) from Amelia - recipe books
Maguey
LOCATION: de Hortus, Amsterdam - see also Jujube/memoir
haircut
Two characters: M & J.
Stake?
What does M want?
- To get a haircut
What does J want?
- To be with company
- To confide <-- that's an action, why does she want to confide? <-- To feel okay by talking to another person
Blocking:
- [off screen]J opens door. J offers tea. [lv rm]M browses the books.
- [lv rm]M picks a book. Goes about noticing new things.
- J enters the living room with tea and snacks. M asks J about the book she has picked out.
More to come
Beginning shots:
Going home from home
J stands in an empty space and recalls the items from her current living room shelf.
I decided to rent an apartment for a few days in the Hague, to have a meaningful birthday and pass some time with intention.
production notes
Jujube/scenes-production-notes
homecoming
SF, London
Various living rooms; dinners and deliberate conversations
homecarrying
1. Pitching my tent
LOCATION: Friesland NL?
2. Sören
LOCATION: Southern Sweden
Saint Paul??????