Graduate Seminar 2016-2017: Difference between revisions

From XPUB & Lens-Based wiki
No edit summary
 
(106 intermediate revisions by 12 users not shown)
Line 1: Line 1:
This is the page for the Graduate Research Seminar 2016-2017 run by Steve Rushton and Marloes de Valk.


==General info re writing==
The outcome of the seminar is a Graduate Project Proposal (1500 words) and a Thesis (8000 words).


Basic wiki style sheet
The seminar will comprise individual tuition with Steve or Marloes and occasional group sessions on specific methods (including peer to peer commentary, editing and proofing)


Titles and works = ''italics''
This page will be used to upload information on your Project Proposal and Thesis.


Essays = Title in Caps


Notation = Harvard System (writer, page number) = (Smith, 26)
= PROJECT PROPOSAL =


Here is the link to the


[[Graduate proposal guidelines]]


[[A Guide to Essay Writing]]
[[last year's proposals]]
 
Jstor is a very useful resource
 
http://www.jstor.org/
 
 
 
[[ Where to find books ]]
 


==7 Oct==
KEY DATES


The AIM of this weeks seminar is to focus particularly on the description of the proposed project:
==05-12-16 Graduate Proposal Deadline:==


10:00 Meet and Steve will give intro
[[Upload link final version here:]]


10:30 Split into studio groups
== PROJECT PROPOSALS FINAL VERSIONS HERE==


Read each other's drafts and give feedback
[[Paste final version 2016 below]]


Each writer will remain silent whilst they listen to the readers' feedback
* Colm: [[http://tangible.tools/project-proposal-v033.html | Grad seminar proposal 0.3.3 — Modes of address ]]
* Kul's: [[User:Kul/FP| City Game]]
* Samira: [[User:Samira/ | Project Proposal]]
* Sara: [[User:Sara/ | Project Proposal]]
* Stone: [[User:Stonestone/HB-PP-Draft-0812| H B ]]<br />
* Pleun: [[User:Pleun/grad/Proposal2ndversion | p r o j e c t proposal]]
* Natalie [[User:SN/Graduate proposal|Graduate proposal/ 09_12_16]]
* Chloe: [[Project_proposal_1207|Chloe's project proposal]]


Make sure your reader gets the answer to these questions:
== Latest draft project proposal ==
Please add a link to your most recent draft here:
* Colm: http://tangible.tools/project-proposal-v033.html
* Sara:
* Chloe: [[Project proposal 1207 ]]
* Pleun: [[User:Pleun/grad/Proposal2ndversion | A Proposal (unfinished) ]]
* Julia:
* Samira:
* Stone: [[User:Stonestone/RWRM-04| draft project proposal 01]]<br />
* Natalie: [[User:SN/Graduate proposal|Graduate proposal/ 04_12_16]]


1) What is the project? (give as concrete a description as possible)
= THESIS =
 
2) What are the practical steps needed to make it?
 
 
13:00 Work on your proposal, dealing with the pointers your peers have made.
 
16:00 Meet as group to chart progress and set achievable aims for the next session (for your proposal AND your practical work)
 
==Intro==
 
You may be asking yourself:
 
Question:  “What do I need to do ahead of the next Graduate Research seminar?”
 
Answer: “Two things: write a concrete proposal and make a prototype or experiment relating to said proposal”.
 
Recap: you are all pretty strong on analyzing the method you use and all of you have something interesting to read and write about, so now you need to
A]  write very practically about what you could make and how you would make it and place that at the beginning of your proposal (don't begin with abstract, theoretical things, the people assessing your proposal will first want to know what the project will be before they find out why it exists and the ideas behind it)  B] make something (a model or a small prototype) ahead of the next session (October 7).
 
The deadline is the 16 November, which will fly by, so apply yourself to the task of writing as practical proposal as possible and making real work to test the proposal(s) you make.
 
When we meet next week I want to see material progress since the draft you made during the last session.
 
 
==PROPOSAL FINAL VERSIONS==
 
*Lucas [[User:Lbattich/Project proposal draft | Project proposal draft (Final version 16th November 2015)]]
*Cihad [https://pzwiki.wdka.nl/mw-mediadesign/images/f/f1/Cihadcaner_projectproposal4.pdf PDF version of my project proposal 16.11.15], wiki page [[Final|project proposal 11.16.15]]
*Joana [https://pzwiki.wdka.nl/mediadesign/Proposal-draft Final version of my project proposal 16th Nov. 15]
* Sol  [http://pzwiki.wdka.nl/mediadesign/Graduate_Proposal_SOL Final version of my project proposal 16-11-15]
* Arantxa [https://pzwiki.wdka.nl/mediadesign/FINAL_DRAFT_PROPOSAL] (Final version 16-11-15)
* Allyson [ https://pzwiki.wdka.nl/mediadesign/Final_Proposal_:_Monday_Nov_16]
* Yuzhen [[User:Emily/proposal_final_draft | final version 16-11-15]]
* Ruben [[File:Graduation_Proposal_Ruben.pdf|Final version 16-11-2015]] (pdf)
* Thomas [[https://pzwiki.wdka.nl/mediadesign/User:ThomasW/First_Proposal_Outline_v2 Final 15.11.15]]
* manetta &rarr; [[User:Manetta/graduation-proposals/proposal-1.0 | proposal 'i-could-have-written-that']]<br>
* Cristina ~ [[User:Cristinac/Proposal3|proposal time]]
*Benjamin:
 
# [[User:10000BL/Project_Proposalv2 | Proposal: Tinder Aesthetics 16-11-15]]
# [[User:10000BL/Project Proposalv3 | Proposal: Nr. 39 with Rice 16-11-15]]
 
* Jules [[https://pzwiki.wdka.nl/mediadesign/User:Jules/graduationproposal  .゚☆]]
* [http://pzwiki.wdka.nl/mediadesign/Graduate_Proposal_SOL Sol]
 
* [[User:Jules/graduationproposal | ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ ]]
-----------------------------------------------
 
==DRAFTS==
 
* [[https://pzwiki.wdka.nl/mediadesign/User:ThomasW/First_Proposal_Outline_v2 Proposal Thomas NEW 15.11.15]]
 
*joana: http://pzwiki.wdka.nl/mediadesign/Proposal-draft
 
*Benjamin:
#[[User:10000BL/Project_Proposalv2 | Proposal: Tinder Aesthetics]] (11-11-15)---> needs minor edits
 
#[[User:10000BL/Project Proposalv3 | Proposal: Nr. 39 with Rice]] (16-11-15)  ---> adjustment are still made, framework stands
 
*Lucas [[User:Lbattich/Project proposal draft | Project proposal draft (Final version 16th November 2015)]]
 
* [[User:Manetta/graduation-proposals/ | manetta &rarr; -0.0 -- +1.0]]<br>
 
*[[User:Emily/proposal 0.02 | Yuzhen Proposal 0.03]]
 
*Cihad [[User:Cihad/ Project Proposal final draft | Proposal draft for 11Nov]],  [https://pzwiki.wdka.nl/mw-mediadesign/images/b/b5/Cihadcaner_projectproposal2.pdf Final version of my project proposal 16.11.15]
 
+ arantxa https://pzwiki.wdka.nl/mediadesign/PROPOSAL
 
* [[User:Ruben/RWRM/First draft of preliminary project proposal|Ruben]] | [[User:Ruben/RWRM/Second draft of project proposal|Draft 2]] | [[User:Ruben/RWRM/Third draft of project proposal|Draft 3]] | [[User:Ruben/RWRM/Fourth draft of project proposal|Draft 4]]
 
* [[User:Cristinac/Proposal| cristina | a drought ]][[User:Cristinac/Proposal2|| a draught]]
 
==Thesis preamble 9-12-15==
 
 
Today. Thesis: making a start
 
-- gathering stuff together for  thesis
 
 
 
1) gather research material (remember your proposal is a very valuable document and could provide the basis for your thesis)
 
2) gather annotations
 
3) compile bibliography (then choose five key texts from your list)
 
4) thesis outline (abstract)
 
Get as much done as you can today, aim to get it all together for the first session (8 Jan 2016)
 
==6-1-16==
 
The task this week is to work on the above, with the aim of having a good thesis outline in time with your thesis tutor (after 18 January)
 
Read this:


[[A Guide to Essay Writing]]
[[A Guide to Essay Writing]]


These are the key dates:
[[ Handbook details- thesis and final project]]
 
Thesis outline (January 18)
 
Chapter one (February 15)
 
First Draft: review progress of thesis (February 29)
 
Second Draft reviewed (May 9)
 
FINAL PROJECT & THESIS DEADLINE (May 30)
 
 
You will work out tutorials with your writing tutor, they will be orientated around the above dates.


==21-1-16==
[[Thesis Guidelines]]


'''UPLOAD THESIS OUTLINE HERE'''
[[Criteria for evaluation (Thesis)]]


'''Steve’s group'''
KEY DATES:


Make link to latest version of thesis here and log aims for next meeting
07-11-16 Thesis outline


Lucas [[User:Lbattich/Thesis outline | Initial Thesis Outline - 18th Janaury]]
09-01-17 Deadline First Chapter


Lucas [[User:Lbattich/Thesis chapter 1 draft | Chapter 1 draft (February 2016)]]
20-02-17: Deadline First Draft Thesis


[[Lucas-Aims for next meeting]]
20-03-17: Joint2: Deadline Second Draft thesis (texts to 2nd readers)


Sol [[Thesis_Outline_SOL|Thesis Outline]]  
[[Second Readers Guidelines]]


Sol [[Thesis_SOL_First_Draft#Content|Thesis First Draft]]
27-03-17: Deadlines Second readers' comments


[[Sol-Aims for next meeting]]
10-04-17: DEADLINE THESIS


Yuzhen [[User:Emily/20151209|Thesis Outline here]]
[[ThesisTTD]]


[[Yuzan Aims for next meeting]]


Cihad [[Thesis_outline|Thesis outline ]]
== Latest draft thesis ==
Please add a link to your most recent draft here:
* Colm: [[ User:Colm/RWRM-year2-Thesis-outline0.2 | Thesis outline 0.2 ]]
* Sara: [[User:Sara/Trials| Cahpeter 1 Pieces]]
* Chloe: [[User:ChloeXX/thesisoutline 1123 | 1123]]
* Pleun: [[User:Pleun/grad/thesisoutline | *$$$*]]
* Julia: [[User:Kul/proposal | not §]]
* Samira:
* Stone: [[User:Stonestone/RWRM-03| draft thesis 02]]<br />
* Natalie:
* Sam: [[User: Samira| outline]]


[[Cihan-Aims for next meeting]]
= Dates =
==21-September-2016==


Benjamin [[User:10000BL/Thesis | Thesis Outline]]
Preparation
:
Be prepared to give an account of where you are at with your self-directed research and talk about what you want to achieve this year.


[[Benjamin-Aims for next meeting]]
Think concretely about what you want to make, how you are going to make it and why you are going to make it.


Thomas [[User:ThomasW/thesis_Outline | Outline 18.01.16]]
Be prepared to discuss your plans for a thesis and what you need to do to achieve it.  


[[Thomas- Aims for next meeting]]
Plan for the day:
[[User:ThomasW/thesis_v1 | Thesis 20.03.16  ]]


1) Split into two groups (Steve and Marloes will chair a group each)


'''Marloes de Valk’s group'''
2) We will discuss your plans.


This group will meet with Marloes on the 21st January
What possibilities are open to you?


Manetta [[User:Manetta/thesis/thesis-outline|(outline)]]
What material from the 'text on method'  you wrote last trimester is useful for the proposal?


Cristina [[User:Cristinac/ThesisOutline|outline]]
What material have you written (descriptions of work , assignments for last year's methods class &c) which you can use?


Ruben - [[User:Ruben/Graduation/Thesis_Outline|Thesis Outline]]
3) Write draft proposal


4) Whilst you work on 3), Steve & Marloes will give individual tutorials to discuss what each student is planning and how best to convey their plan in writing.


'''Annet’s group
Outcome: a draft project proposal
'''


Arantxa [[https://pzwiki.wdka.nl/mediadesign/THESIS_OUTLINE | Thesis outline]]
5) Near the end of the day, Steve will give an introduction to the thesis writing process and  we will discuss the thesis as a group.
For an assignment, you will make a draft outline ahead of the next session including a bibliography of no more than 5 key texts.  
In the next session we will discuss your outline. (what are you going to write? about and what material do you have to hand and how to organise time &c).


Joana
Ahead of next session:


Julie
Upload latest version on to wiki


Allyson    https://pzwiki.wdka.nl/mediadesign/Thesis_Outline_-_Due_Jan_18
Next session:  
https://pzwiki.wdka.nl/mediadesign/Structured_Outline


==UPLOAD THESIS DRAFT FOR SECOND READER HERE==
Review proposal draft in groups


Review thesis outline


Solange [[File:SOLANGE_FRANKORT_THESIS_SECOND_DRAFT.compressed.pdf|Solange]]
Work individually, in groups and individual tutorials


Graduate Seminar
[[2015-2016]]


Upload draft proposals here
== 05 october 2016 ==


==Second readers==
* Colm: [[User:Colm/RWRM-year2-Project-Proposal | Colm Project proposal]]
* Sara:
* Chloe: [[1st_Draft_921|chlooe draft 921]]
* Pleun: [[User:Pleun/grad/Proposal1stversion | drafffft]]
* Julia: [[User:Kul/proposal | not §]] & [[User:Kul/proposalz | §]]
* Stone: [[User:Stonestone/RWRM-01| Hee Hee]]<br />
* Samira: [[User:Samira/proposal | draftdraft]]
* Natalie: [[User:SN/Graduate proposal draft|Graduate proposal draft / 05_10_16]]


> Simon = Benjamin - Cihad
Pad for today: https://pad.pzimediadesign.nl/p/2016_10_05-RW&RS-Methods


> Steve = Ruben
Today we will:


> Aymeric = Joana - Manetta
'''AM:'''


> Marloes = - Thomas
1) Upload draft onto this page


> Michael= Cristina - Jules
2) Go into groups and read each other's draft proposals.


> Annet = Lucas
3) Reader= give feedback and comments on what you understand


> David = Arantxa  - Allyson
4) Writer = keep silent and takes notes (observe what the text communicates and what needs to be changed)


> Barend = Solange - Yuzhen
5) Change places




general tips:
'''After Lunch'''


Work on proposal and discuss it with tutors


1) '''Communication''' - Think of the reader. It is not safe to assume they have knowledge of what you are writing about. Even if they do have knowledge this needs to be contextualized.  Generally people appreciate clarity.
==26-October-2016==
'''Individual sessions with Steve or Marloes'''


2) '''Description''' - Remember to describe the '''texts''' you are citing (synopsis of relevant arguments) and the '''things''' you are discussing (your own work, the work of others).
Please add your name to a time slot --->


3) '''Citation''' - give appropriate acknowledgment of the text/work you are citing. Do not leave it to the end of the process to place citations, as your texts grow more complex and longer this becomes a tedious task so give citations as you go. Use the Harvard method.
  https://pzwiki.wdka.nl/mediadesign/Calendars:Networked_Media_Calendar/Networked_Media_Calendar/26-10-2016_-Event_1


4) '''Notation''' - always take notes and log your sources.  
Please add a link to your current thesis outline & 5 key texts here:
https://pzwiki.wdka.nl/mw-mediadesign/index.php?title=Graduate_Seminar_2016-2017#Latest_draft_thesis


5) '''Identify and eliminate bad habits'''  as you go - this saves time. Examples: its/it's / i/I
Please add a link to your latest project proposal here:
https://pzwiki.wdka.nl/mw-mediadesign/index.php?title=Graduate_Seminar_2016-2017#Latest_draft_project_proposal


6) '''Bibliography
[[Graduate Seminar 2017-2018]]
'''
n) '''stop wiki sloppiness''' - this is the page through which we communicate so always make a link to the latest version on this page

Latest revision as of 14:08, 10 September 2017

This is the page for the Graduate Research Seminar 2016-2017 run by Steve Rushton and Marloes de Valk.

The outcome of the seminar is a Graduate Project Proposal (1500 words) and a Thesis (8000 words).

The seminar will comprise individual tuition with Steve or Marloes and occasional group sessions on specific methods (including peer to peer commentary, editing and proofing)

This page will be used to upload information on your Project Proposal and Thesis.


PROJECT PROPOSAL

Here is the link to the

Graduate proposal guidelines

last year's proposals

KEY DATES

05-12-16 Graduate Proposal Deadline:

Upload link final version here:

PROJECT PROPOSALS FINAL VERSIONS HERE

Paste final version 2016 below

Latest draft project proposal

Please add a link to your most recent draft here:

THESIS

A Guide to Essay Writing

Handbook details- thesis and final project

Thesis Guidelines

Criteria for evaluation (Thesis)

KEY DATES:

07-11-16 Thesis outline

09-01-17 Deadline First Chapter

20-02-17: Deadline First Draft Thesis

20-03-17: Joint2: Deadline Second Draft thesis (texts to 2nd readers)

Second Readers Guidelines

27-03-17: Deadlines Second readers' comments

10-04-17: DEADLINE THESIS

ThesisTTD


Latest draft thesis

Please add a link to your most recent draft here:

Dates

21-September-2016

Preparation

Be prepared to give an account of where you are at with your self-directed research and talk about what you want to achieve this year.

Think concretely about what you want to make, how you are going to make it and why you are going to make it.

Be prepared to discuss your plans for a thesis and what you need to do to achieve it.

Plan for the day:

1) Split into two groups (Steve and Marloes will chair a group each)

2) We will discuss your plans.

What possibilities are open to you?

What material from the 'text on method' you wrote last trimester is useful for the proposal?

What material have you written (descriptions of work , assignments for last year's methods class &c) which you can use?

3) Write draft proposal

4) Whilst you work on 3), Steve & Marloes will give individual tutorials to discuss what each student is planning and how best to convey their plan in writing.

Outcome: a draft project proposal

5) Near the end of the day, Steve will give an introduction to the thesis writing process and we will discuss the thesis as a group. For an assignment, you will make a draft outline ahead of the next session including a bibliography of no more than 5 key texts. In the next session we will discuss your outline. (what are you going to write? about and what material do you have to hand and how to organise time &c).

Ahead of next session:

Upload latest version on to wiki

Next session:

Review proposal draft in groups

Review thesis outline

Work individually, in groups and individual tutorials

Graduate Seminar 2015-2016

Upload draft proposals here

05 october 2016

Pad for today: https://pad.pzimediadesign.nl/p/2016_10_05-RW&RS-Methods

Today we will:

AM:

1) Upload draft onto this page

2) Go into groups and read each other's draft proposals.

3) Reader= give feedback and comments on what you understand

4) Writer = keep silent and takes notes (observe what the text communicates and what needs to be changed)

5) Change places


After Lunch

Work on proposal and discuss it with tutors

26-October-2016

Individual sessions with Steve or Marloes

Please add your name to a time slot --->

https://pzwiki.wdka.nl/mediadesign/Calendars:Networked_Media_Calendar/Networked_Media_Calendar/26-10-2016_-Event_1

Please add a link to your current thesis outline & 5 key texts here: https://pzwiki.wdka.nl/mw-mediadesign/index.php?title=Graduate_Seminar_2016-2017#Latest_draft_thesis

Please add a link to your latest project proposal here: https://pzwiki.wdka.nl/mw-mediadesign/index.php?title=Graduate_Seminar_2016-2017#Latest_draft_project_proposal

Graduate Seminar 2017-2018