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(A and B will address the audience unless stated otherwise) | (A and B will address the audience unless stated otherwise) | ||
A (important) At Google, we are keenly aware of the trust you place in us and our responsibility to | A (important) At Google, we are keenly aware of the trust you place in us and our responsibility to | ||
protect your privacy.1 | |||
B (enthusiastic) Yada, yada! | B (enthusiastic) Yada, yada! | ||
A As part of this responsibility, we let you know what information we collect when you use our2 | A As part of this responsibility, we let you know what information we collect when you use our2 web properties.3 | ||
B (serious) Yada | B (serious) Yada | ||
A We may use a range of information […] to provide you with advertising […] including cookies4, | A We may use a range of information […] to provide you with advertising […] including cookies4, | ||
Cookies can be used to store data about the user's computer or5 IP addresses6. | |||
Every computer connected to the Internet is assigned a unique number known as an (IP) address.7 | |||
A We do not use your email address […] to send commercial or marketing messages8 | A We do not use your email address […] to send commercial or marketing messages8 | ||
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A (strongly as well) Absolutely not9 | A (strongly as well) Absolutely not9 | ||
A We provide information10, including IP addresses11, to help copyright holders manage their | A We provide information10, including IP addresses11, to help copyright holders manage their | ||
intellectual property online. | |||
B (towards A) Yada? | B (towards A) Yada? | ||
A (towards B, hesitant) Absolutely12 (reassuring) [but] it's not possible to determine your identity | A (towards B, hesitant) Absolutely12 (reassuring) [but] it's not possible to determine your identity | ||
solely based on your IP-address | |||
B (relieved) Yada! | B (relieved) Yada! | ||
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(A returns) | (A returns) | ||
A (quickly, under pressure) Our focus remains on providing you with the best possible […] experience and we continue to be committed to protecting your privacy17 | A (quickly, under pressure) Our focus remains on providing you with the best possible […] experience | ||
and we continue to be committed to protecting your privacy17 | |||
(A runs of again towards the other side, B is still chasing) | (A runs of again towards the other side, B is still chasing) | ||
Revision as of 14:30, 4 March 2012
On this page I'm writing down my thoughts about my graduation from the last two weeks. They are an attempt to get at a better user experience ;)
Critique
There were some doubts in the teachers team about the project. I'll quickly summarise what I got from their critiques:
- It's doubtful whether Cookie Monster and Miss Piggy are the right characters
- The project should stir up a strong emotion like a shock about what the browser is doing
- The project should stay closer to reality and reveal which scripts are at work
- There is a danger that I'm pointing my finger at the user saying: "bad user!"
Google language
In the extension of staying closer to reality I tried to construct my characters from language only found at Google privacy pages, terms of services and the language they use in their services. This resulted in the following text:
(A and B will address the audience unless stated otherwise) A (important) At Google, we are keenly aware of the trust you place in us and our responsibility to protect your privacy.1 B (enthusiastic) Yada, yada! A As part of this responsibility, we let you know what information we collect when you use our2 web properties.3 B (serious) Yada A We may use a range of information […] to provide you with advertising […] including cookies4, Cookies can be used to store data about the user's computer or5 IP addresses6. Every computer connected to the Internet is assigned a unique number known as an (IP) address.7 A We do not use your email address […] to send commercial or marketing messages8 B (strongly) Yada yada! A (strongly as well) Absolutely not9 A We provide information10, including IP addresses11, to help copyright holders manage their intellectual property online. B (towards A) Yada? A (towards B, hesitant) Absolutely12 (reassuring) [but] it's not possible to determine your identity solely based on your IP-address B (relieved) Yada! A We provide13 IP-addresses … (hesitant) and usernames14 B (towards A, shocked) Yada! A [And] cookies15 B (towards A, mad) Yada yada yada yada yada yada yada yada!!!! (A flees from the scene followed by B in pursuit) A (while fleeing, panicked) Don't misuse [us]16 B Yada yada yada yada yada yada!!!! (A returns) A (quickly, under pressure) Our focus remains on providing you with the best possible […] experience and we continue to be committed to protecting your privacy17 (A runs of again towards the other side, B is still chasing) B Yada yada yada yada yada!!!!