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Thesis proposal: Writing the Image

latest: https://docs.google.com/document/d/17f8B3_IX4SmDIgM4GAb3n6-JAGGVsB6zSEMUwA72DLw/edit#

My thesis is a memoir in which I reflect on my practice as a writer and filmmaker. It weaves together the personal and the intellectual — namely, my study of film as a medium of expression, union and empathy. I have been jotting down paragraphs since September 2019. There is no particular structure at this moment, but I have noticed recurring questions and the emergence of themes, which are:

What are the images that I have held onto over the years?

How do I use words to express these images?

What are the meanings and the feelings these images carry?

Why do I write?

How do I (learn to) express with filmmaking?

The free-writing can be seen on this page: jujube/memoir2.

I will start to produce via editing and re-writing and substantiate my observations with the text I read and the films/plays/lectures I reviewed as well as realizations from my making. Some key words I have identified are:

narrative, emotions, emotional intelligence, self-knowledge

definition of medium, understanding the image, making without knowing all, craft

solitude, loneliness, spiritual diaspora, trancendance

References

Things I have read and notated:

Campany, D. (2007) The cinematic. London: Whitechapel (Documents of contemporary art, 2007: 5).
Chee, A. (2018) How to write an autobiographical novel : essays. Boston: Houghton Mifflin Harcourt.
Kern, S. (2004) A cultural history of causality : science, murder novels, and systems of thought. Princeton: Princeton University Press.
Farr, I. (2012) Memory. London: Whitechapel Gallery (Documents of contemporary art).
Mamet, D. (1992) On directing film. New York: Penguin Books.
Merewether, C. (2006) The archive. London etc: Whitechapel etc (Documents of contemporary art).
Miall, D. (2011) Emotions and the Structuring of Narrative Responses. Poetics Today 1 June 2011; 32 (2): 323–348. doi: https://doi.org/10.1215/03335372-1162704
Nussbaum, M. (1988) Narrative Emotions. Ethics, Vol. 98, No. 2., pp. 225-254.
Shouse, E. (2005) Feeling, Emotion, Affect. M/C Journal 8.6. <http://journal.media-culture.org.au/0512/03-shouse.php>
Stallabrass, J. (2013) Documentary. London: Whitechapel (Documents of contemporary art).
Voìgt, Ellen Bryant. Image. New England Review, Vol. 13, No. 3/4, 1991, pp. 254–268. JSTOR, www.jstor.org/stable/40243421.

Things I have in the process of reading/notating:

Bird Cloud, Anne Proulx
Limbo, Dan Fox
The Argonauts, Maggie Nelson

Form & concept

Selected Statuses. A zine I made during the first year consisting of 50 selected status updates that I posted on Facebook from 2013-2018.

Christian Boltanski: Reconstitution [1]. "Heavy brown cardboard box with title printed in black on label pasted to lid, containing 18 items."

A return to some early thoughts

Jujube/memoir

Photos

do they serve as illustration, prompts?

a plastic bag with Chinese label

sketching a room: a series

still from Scene 1

TBC

Annotated Bibliography

This is a synthesis of some materials I have read so far. The annotations are colloquial at the moment. As the synthesis continues I plan to become more precise with the literature and succinct in my annotations.

feelings

I want to evoke feelings. I believe it is shared human nature and thus a way to foster empathy. Empathy comes from compassion (understanding and love) for the self.

I can now say this, with certainty and humility, that I want to surround myself with understanding and thus create a world where people understand each other. If you see me in you, and if I see you in me, perhaps the world will suffer less.

A few people whose judgement I trust have told me, "nobody can ever understand you in totality," which I have come to agree. In trying to be understood, I finally become able to understand myself. And that's where I connect self-compassion and empathy.

memories

Jujube/synopsis#Siegfried_Kracauer:_Memory_Images.2C_1927
Jujube/abstracts-non-text#Play:_salt <--a one-woman play instead of text

Memories are images strung together. Words construct images — words come to me via memories.

A few people told me that my writing touches or bring to mind images.

That's how poetry works, I suppose.

I want others to understand, through these images, something about me, something about themselves.

the making of images without language

"A film is a story or a proposition... that is shaped, angled, finite, intended, whether it is a documentary, an art installation, a bit of gritty realism, or a full-blown fantasy... A film-maker is a person who makes such things."

I encountered the camera not through intention, but chance.

If you ask, "why the camera," I would say:

I took a chance. I connected the dots from my past. I was curious.

And I have been privileged to stay with it, hold it, test it. I have become decisive and considerate with its help — I am an ally, and more importantly, a student.

"And why film?"

I discovered time through film. I unearthed my intention about image-making. In writing and in making films I am drawing a very, very large circle, some sort of infinity that help me understand my being in this world.

I ask more concrete questions through the things I make:

Do narrative and personal memory ever come together? Is that the form of the Memoir? Or Must one become fictionalized?

How to evoke the sense from memory? (Is this a how question?)

Or, if I want to evoke feeling, should I construct a story around it?

causality, narrative, dramatic logic

Jujube/synopsis#Stephen_Kern:_A_Cultural_History_of_Causality_.7C_Chapter_5:_Emotion

Causality is important in determining narrative. Different time periods (cultures) tend to favor different causality. (Perpetuations of the unhealty, unresolved kind seem irresponsible.)

Jujube/synopsis#David_Mamet:_On_Directing_Film

Narrative, in the dramatic sense, follows dramaturgy.

other

In writing the thesis I am also finding its epistemological position and discursivity. Rather than creating new knowledge, I emphasize the understanding and revisiting of existing knowledge. In a way, can films heal? If so, how so?

Feedback

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+latest: https://docs.google.com/document/d/17f8B3_IX4SmDIgM4GAb3n6-JAGGVsB6zSEMUwA72DLw/edit#
-My mom finally mailed me a box of stuff, which she picked out from what I had mailed her from the US the year before. She said she couldn't include the knives. Apparently the government had banned the mailing of sharp objects. My immersion blender didn't make it, either.
+My thesis is a memoir in which I reflect on my practice as a writer and filmmaker. It weaves together the personal and the intellectual — namely, my study of film as a medium of expression, union and empathy. I have been jotting down paragraphs since September 2019. There is no particular structure at this moment, but I have noticed recurring questions and the emergence of themes, which are:
-My mom sent the box from China. I knew she packed it because I found two plastic bags with the Chinese label "Bei Yi Department Store." She worked there for more than twenty years before retiring at the age of fifty. I recognized my dad's handwriting on the mailing label. In the field for "detailed description of contents," he wrote — in Chinese characters and then, using the same squarish strokes, English letters — "Clothes", "Books". He declared their worth: 1500 US Dollars.
+: What are the images that I have held onto over the years?
+: How do I use words to express these images?
+: What are the meanings and the feelings these images carry?
+: Why do I write?
+: How do I (learn to) express with filmmaking?
-Inside the box I found, besides the books and shirts, two National Geographic hiking maps and a grocery bag I got on the beach of Oaxaca.
+The free-writing can be seen on this page: [[jujube/memoir2]].
-I suppose my dad understood the value of these things to me by putting down a number ten times higher than their material cost.
+I will start to produce via editing and re-writing and substantiate my observations with the text I read and the films/plays/lectures I reviewed as well as realizations from my making. Some key words I have identified are:
-One of the books was ''Letters to a Young Poet.'' I ordered it from Amazon the day my college architecture advisor told me to read it. "My dad wanted me to be a lawyer," he said, "as an English major, I thought architecture would be the middle ground." We were having a conversation about future — probably my future. I remember him saying: the present things are clear while the past trickles away.
+: narrative, emotions, emotional intelligence, self-knowledge
+: definition of medium, understanding the image, making without knowing all, craft
+: solitude, loneliness, spiritual diaspora, trancendance
-Trickles, tinkles, twinkles, he must have said one of those words. I remember him pressing his fingers together and making a gesture towards something far. I remember agreeing with the revelation. I remember those who instilled this sort of quiet provocation in that young mind of mine.
+= References =
-My first ever summer fling used one of Rilke's quotes as his email signature. "Everything is gestation towards birth," I remember reading it and not quite knowing why he had chose that line. Finding it again when I read the book was like visiting a feeling I had forgotten. But of course, the most important quote to me was something else.
+Things I have read and notated:
-'''words from Rilke'''
+* Campany, D. (2007) The cinematic. London: Whitechapel (Documents of contemporary art, 2007: 5).
+* Chee, A. (2018) How to write an autobiographical novel : essays. Boston: Houghton Mifflin Harcourt.
+* Kern, S. (2004) A cultural history of causality : science, murder novels, and systems of thought. Princeton: Princeton University Press.
+* Farr, I. (2012) Memory. London: Whitechapel Gallery (Documents of contemporary art).
+* Mamet, D. (1992) On directing film. New York: Penguin Books.
+* Merewether, C. (2006) The archive. London etc: Whitechapel etc (Documents of contemporary art).
+* Miall, D. (2011) Emotions and the Structuring of Narrative Responses. Poetics Today 1 June 2011; 32 (2): 323–348. doi: https://doi.org/10.1215/03335372-1162704
+* Nussbaum, M. (1988) Narrative Emotions. Ethics, Vol. 98, No. 2., pp. 225-254.
+* Shouse, E. (2005) Feeling, Emotion, Affect. M/C Journal 8.6. <http://journal.media-culture.org.au/0512/03-shouse.php>
+* Stallabrass, J. (2013) Documentary. London: Whitechapel (Documents of contemporary art).
+* Voìgt, Ellen Bryant. Image. New England Review, Vol. 13, No. 3/4, 1991, pp. 254–268. JSTOR, www.jstor.org/stable/40243421.
-I wrote — had been writing — because I depended on it.
+Things I have in the process of reading/notating:
-If I didn't write, the unsaid words would weigh in my limbs and my chest; I would collapse and burst into a pool of flames.
-Things became true when I wrote. The tip of the pen touched the paper, casting thoughts into form. I used to write under a lamp, watching the ink absorbed by the paper with every twist and turns of my cursive. I often got used to a pen and felt odd when switching to a new one. They were too thick, too smooth, too shiny, too fine.
+*Bird Cloud, Anne Proulx
+*Limbo, Dan Fox
+*The Argonauts, Maggie Nelson
-I wrote, but for the longest time I couldn't say I was a writer. Writing was then a private affair. When I eventually found ways to share I would only share a small portion of what I wrote, which from the outside resembled riddles, poetry, report and sarcasm.
+== Form & concept ==
-There was a distance between me and me, and therefore, there was a distance between me and the world.
+[[File:Ss1.jpg|400px]] [[File:Ss2.jpg|400px]]
-== plays ==
+Selected Statuses. A zine I made during the first year consisting of 50 selected status updates that I posted on Facebook from 2013-2018.
-== images ==
+[[File:107291.jpg|400px]] [[File:107291 10.jpg |400px]]
-The first time I saw a dandelion I was twenty years old.
+Christian Boltanski: Reconstitution [https://www.vincentborrelli.com/pages/books/107291/christian-boltanski/christian-boltanski-reconstitution]. "Heavy brown cardboard box with title printed in black on label pasted to lid, containing 18 items."
---
+== A return to some early thoughts ==
---
+[[Jujube/memoir]]
---
+== Photos  ==
-"Being here is a demarcation of time," I wrote that in September, 2018.
+do they serve as illustration, prompts?
-I wanted to make a speech about the physical and internal turmoil, some of which I endured and some of which I inflicted on myself. But I didn't.  Instead I showed some works from the past. The first website I made, the last website I made. A series of photos. A snapshot of a play script.
+: a plastic bag with Chinese label
+: sketching a room: a series
+: still from Scene 1
-= key texts=
+TBC
-== feelings ==
+== Annotated Bibliography ==
+This is a synthesis of some materials I have read so far. The annotations are colloquial at the moment. As the synthesis continues I plan to become more precise with the literature and succinct in my annotations.
+=== feelings ===
 * [[Jujube/synopsis#United_by_Feelings]]
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 A few people whose judgement I trust have told me, "nobody can ever understand you in totality," which I have come to agree. In trying to be understood, I finally become able to understand myself. And that's where I connect self-compassion and empathy.
-== causality, narrative, dramatic logic ==
+=== memories ===
+* [[Jujube/synopsis#Siegfried_Kracauer:_Memory_Images.2C_1927]]
+* [[Jujube/abstracts-non-text#Play:_salt]] <--a one-woman play instead of text
+Memories are images strung together. Words construct images — words come to me via memories.
+A few people told me that my writing touches or bring to mind images.
-* [[Jujube/synopsis#Stephen_Kern:_A_Cultural_History_of_Causality_.7C_Chapter_5:_Emotion]]
+That's how poetry works, I suppose.
+I want others to understand, through these images, something about me, something about themselves.
+=== the making of images without language ===
+*[[Jujube/synopsis#The_Cinematic_.28DoCA.29]]
+*[[Jujube/synopsis#Film:_A_Very_Short_Introduction]]
+"A film is a story or a proposition... that is shaped, angled, finite, intended, whether it is a documentary, an art installation, a bit of gritty realism, or a full-blown fantasy... A film-maker is a person who makes such things."
+I encountered the camera not through intention, but chance.
+If you ask, "why the camera," I would say:
-Causality is important in determining narrative. Different time periods (cultures) tend to favor different causality. (Perpetuations of the unhealty, unresolved kind seem irresponsible.)
+I took a chance. I connected the dots from my past. I was curious.
-* [[Jujube/synopsis#David_Mamet:_On_Directing_Film]]
+And I have been privileged to stay with it, hold it, test it. I have become decisive and considerate with its help — I am an ally, and more importantly, a student.
-Narrative, in the dramatic sense, follows dramaturgy.
+"And why film?"
-== personal memories (and the conflict with narrative) ==
+I discovered time through film. I unearthed my intention about image-making. In writing and in making films I am drawing a very, very large circle, some sort of infinity that help me understand my being in this world.
-* [[Jujube/synopsis#Siegfried_Kracauer:_Memory_Images.2C_1927]]
+I ask more concrete questions through the things I make:
-* [[Jujube/abstracts-non-text#Play:_salt]] <--a one-woman play instead of text
-Memories are images strung together. Words construct images — words come to me via memories. I am turning personal memories into images... And I want these images to make sense to others. I want others to understand, through these images, something about me, something about themselves.
+Do narrative and personal memory ever come together? Is that the form of the Memoir? Or Must one become fictionalized?
-Do narrative and memory come together in the form memoir? How to evoke the senses from memory? Not necessarily with my own memory... unless I turn my own memories into a story, with the context, the objective of the character, the setup.
+How to evoke the sense from memory? (Is this a how question?)
 Or, if I want to evoke feeling, should I construct a story around it?
-= a collection of little books =
+=== causality, narrative, dramatic logic ===
+* [[Jujube/synopsis#Stephen_Kern:_A_Cultural_History_of_Causality_.7C_Chapter_5:_Emotion]]
+Causality is important in determining narrative. Different time periods (cultures) tend to favor different causality. (Perpetuations of the unhealty, unresolved kind seem irresponsible.)
+* [[Jujube/synopsis#David_Mamet:_On_Directing_Film]]
+Narrative, in the dramatic sense, follows dramaturgy.
+=== other ===
+In writing the thesis I am also finding its epistemological position and discursivity. Rather than creating new knowledge, I emphasize the understanding and revisiting of existing knowledge. In a way, can films heal? If so, how so?
-[[File:Little-black-classic-book-009.jpg |800px]]
+=Feedback=
-[[File:Screen Shot 2019-09-18 at 15.36.50.png |800px]]
+.10 https://pad.xpub.nl/p/jueartemisrita

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