User talk:FLEM/Graduationprojectproposaldraft

[Hi Emm

So you found me over here in the discussion section.

We can go through the text in detail tmrw, but my main response is:er46

I think it is a strong proposal that builds well on the great work you did last year. Your healthy obsession with the project is clearly e021xpressed.The section Why do you want to make it? is very strong, and could serve as an introduction to the project (in thesis or workshop context)

You are very clear that you want to make a series of workshops. The thesis could be the fieldwork analysis of the workshops. You don't want to get into a situation where the fieldwork, which should be fun and experimental, is tripped over by the analysis. So I would suggest you make a compartment for workshops and a compartment for analysis of field work (thesis); where you reflect on what you have done up until April 2023. This would make comparatively easy work of the thesis because you would be presenting and analysing the knowledge you produce in the workshops. It could also be fun, being in the form of a notebook which is also a thesis. In this scenario, the aim, I suppose is to leave space to make the workshops as much fun as possible and make a notation system thesis-notebook which reflects on that research.

Let's take this suggestion further tmrw.]