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== Scene One == | == Scene One == | ||
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Jue offers Marieke tea. Jue prepares in the kitchen. | Jue offers Marieke tea. Jue prepares in the kitchen. | ||
Marieke looks through the books in the living room. | Marieke looks through the books in the living room. | ||
Jue (O.S.): What tea would you like? | Jue (O.S.): What tea would you like? | ||
Marieke picks a tea. | Marieke picks a tea. | ||
Marieke picks a book to read, moves to the bench. | |||
Marieke picks a book to read, | |||
Jue comes in with: tray of teapot, cups and snacks. | Jue comes in with: tray of teapot, cups and snacks. | ||
Jue sets the table. | Jue sets the table. | ||
Jue sits across Marieke. | |||
Marieke asks Jue about the book. | |||
Marieke asks Jue about the book | |||
Jue moves to the bench, reads the book with Marieke together. | Jue moves to the bench, reads the book with Marieke together. | ||
Jue is telling the story of the books from the shelf. | Jue is telling the story of the books from the shelf. | ||
The two of them stare at the shelf. | The two of them stare at the shelf. | ||
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== Scene Two == | == Scene Two == | ||
Marieke sits on the chair near the lamp. | |||
Jue (O.S.) turns on the lamp. | Jue (O.S.) turns on the lamp. | ||
Jue cuts Marieke's hair. | Jue cuts Marieke's hair. | ||
Various close-ups of hand and hair. | Various close-ups of hand and hair. | ||
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Marieke relays the story. | Marieke relays the story. | ||
Jue offers Marieke a mirror. | Jue offers Marieke a mirror. | ||
Marieke checks her bangs. | Marieke checks her bangs. |
Revision as of 16:12, 24 September 2019
O.S. = Off Screen
Act One
Tea, Books, Haircut.
Scene One
0 - black screen, audio only Jue offers Marieke tea. Jue prepares in the kitchen.
Marieke looks through the books in the living room. Jue (O.S.): What tea would you like? Marieke picks a tea.
Marieke picks a book to read, moves to the bench. Jue comes in with: tray of teapot, cups and snacks. Jue sets the table. Jue sits across Marieke.
Marieke asks Jue about the book. Jue moves to the bench, reads the book with Marieke together.
Jue is telling the story of the books from the shelf. The two of them stare at the shelf. (beat) Eventually, Jue: Haircut?
Scene Two
Marieke sits on the chair near the lamp. Jue (O.S.) turns on the lamp.
Jue cuts Marieke's hair. Various close-ups of hand and hair. During the haircut, Jue: Where did you get your haircut before? Marieke relays the story.
Jue offers Marieke a mirror. Marieke checks her bangs. (beat) Eventually, Jue: More tea?