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Revision as of 22:59, 5 October 2017
October 6th 2017
Comment: Filmed and edited in half an hour. Wanted to try something a bit less conventional visually. I got as feedback to be a bit less conventional in my choice of aesthetics (and thinking about it: the main point of queer cinema is to be unconventional I guess). The video is blurred, and the wrestling is awkward. Comment from a viewer: "looks like a cheap music video"
October 5th 2017
Comment: Scan scan scan
Feedback today:
For thesis outline:
- Use text on methods/graduate proposal for thesis outline
- Write synopsis of text you want to use, as a way to articulate argument
- How much can images communicate without text
- Visual essay ?
- What are the ingredients of queer cinema