Divided Together

I was involved with the narrative class which involved looking at my work I have made for a short film, Divided Together. The general consensus was that my script was boring and lacks character development, which i accept. I feel this is fair assessment and I intend to work on the script more over the Christmas holidays in collaboration with my friend who I wrote the first draft with. This project is something I intend to work on for a long period of time until it's of a standard worth filming.