User:Stonestone/secondessayfort2stone

Draft

Gather material

Make synopsis of key texts

Identify key points

Extract key quotations

Outline

• Introduction
  

1) Initial motivation of the work(why)
2) Brief procedure of making it(how)
3) Brief description of its appearance, form, technic knowledge and tools.(what-10%)

• Concepts
  

1) Background fairy tale(why)
2) Inspirations(why they give me some little sparks in my brain.)
2) History / Mystery of being in a daze, and my thoughts of being in a daze.
3) Explaination (the reasons of choosing these objects/vision/sound/display/etc.)

• How to make it
  

1) The tools and why I choose these tools
2) Specific procedure of making it (I should write the working log!)

• References
  

1) Texts
2) Videos

Abstract

Intro

Body of Text

Conclusion

Bibliography

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Editing: follow the "Orwell method"; identify the reader; use active modeof address; make three drafts with a specific outcome for each draft (these may correspond to text editing, copy editing and proof reading stages); print each draft out; file each draft; read aloud (this helps with punctuation); get second reader to give feedback on second and final draft.Here is a general guide: A Guide to Essay Writing