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Follow the protagonist to places where she takes photography with a 35mm. | |||
What does she want to remember? | |||
Things of beauty and intrigue: | |||
- winding staircases near Kino | |||
- butterflies | |||
- what are the moments you associate beauty with? | |||
Things with friends -- iconic human connection? | |||
- elaborate dinners | |||
- picnic, smiles | |||
- beach, water, kite | |||
Portrait? | |||
- photo studio | |||
Close-ups: | |||
- looking | |||
- framing | |||
- focus? -- POV? | |||
End scene: | |||
She goes to the darkroom. | |||
Screen goes dark, sound of loading film | |||
Developing (all steps) | |||
When the images emerge: | |||
They are blank. | |||
End scene alternative: | |||
She goes to a vast space. | |||
It's just the camera and her now. | |||
Shots of her taking off the camera. | |||
Shots of her opening the camera. | |||
It's empty. | |||
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[[Jujube/home#genesis]] | [[Jujube/home#genesis]] |
Revision as of 22:18, 26 September 2019
homemaking
LOCATION: fabric station, Bree
Bree, discovery of: - journal from Leah - this New Life (Dante) from Amelia - recipe books
haircut
Two characters: M & J.
Stake?
What does M want?
- To get a haircut
What does J want?
- To be with company
- To confide <-- that's an action, why does she want to confide? <-- To feel okay by talking to another person
Blocking:
- [off screen]J opens door. J offers tea. [lv rm]M browses the books.
- [lv rm]M picks a book. Goes about noticing new things.
- J enters the living room with tea and snacks. M asks J about the book she has picked out.
More to come
Beginning shots:
Going home from home
J stands in an empty space and recalls the items from her current living room shelf.
I decided to rent an apartment for a few days in the Hague, to have a meaningful birthday and pass some time with intention.
production notes
Jujube/scenes-production-notes
homecoming
SF, London. Various living rooms; dinners and deliberate conversations
Breakfast conversations
I want to use the audio from the conversations in London.
From the bones of lemon to Adam and Eve.
I was able to have these conversations because I was in an extremely comfortable place: a nice kitchen/living room (physical space) and with Nuri (psychological space).
- Transcripts first -- this could be a publication -- but I am seeing shots happening in the photo/video studio as in an epic journey (dramatic lighting and all). I am seeing hands performing: showing lemon seeds and peeling apples.
homecarrying
1. Pitching my tent
LOCATION: Friesland NL?
2. Sören
LOCATION: Southern Sweden
Saint Paul??????
remember
Follow the protagonist to places where she takes photography with a 35mm.
What does she want to remember?
Things of beauty and intrigue:
- winding staircases near Kino
- butterflies
- what are the moments you associate beauty with?
Things with friends -- iconic human connection?
- elaborate dinners
- picnic, smiles
- beach, water, kite
Portrait?
- photo studio
Close-ups:
- looking
- framing
- focus? -- POV?
End scene:
She goes to the darkroom.
Screen goes dark, sound of loading film
Developing (all steps)
When the images emerge:
They are blank.
End scene alternative:
She goes to a vast space.
It's just the camera and her now.
Shots of her taking off the camera.
Shots of her opening the camera.
It's empty.