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Thesis outline | == '''Thesis outline''' == | ||
What do you WANT to write? [What will the text be about? (thesis). What do you want to explore? | |||
Storytelling as format like text on practice | Storytelling as format like text on practice | ||
how text speaks to the reader: | |||
how text speaks to the reader: narrative and diary. | |||
Like a story I tell my friends, casual and personal mode of address. | Like a story I tell my friends, casual and personal mode of address. | ||
I want to explore my concept of identity and how it can be reduced or added to it to feel a whole. I will go over how I claimed my concept of identity and what inspired me and had an impact on my understanding of it. | I want to explore my concept of identity and how it can be reduced or added to it to feel a whole. I will go over how I claimed my concept of identity and what inspired me and had an impact on my understanding of it. | ||
How feelings relate to identity, feeling empty or missing. | How feelings relate to identity, feeling empty or missing. | ||
I will talk about how I find a way to show missing emptiness. | I will talk about how I find a way to show missing emptiness. | ||
Showing something that is not there by visualizing silence, missing, empty with different visual elements. | Showing something that is not there by visualizing silence, missing, empty with different visual elements. | ||
what do you want to write? | what do you want to write? | ||
Be clear about HOW you want to tell your story.] | Be clear about HOW you want to tell your story.] | ||
Outline three key issues you want to explore. | Outline three key issues you want to explore. | ||
Please think of only 3 key issues. | Please think of only 3 key issues. | ||
# First key issue)what is my definition of identity? How do I see it and what inspired me about this topic? What’s out there about it? | |||
Second key issue ) what i felt and a narrative about how i felt when i could not show part of me that i felt make me and now they were missing. | # Second key issue ) what i felt and a narrative about how i felt when i could not show part of me that i felt make me and now they were missing. | ||
# Third key issue) reflect on the process i went through to visualize all this and make a film out of it. A photo series a video dairy | |||
How? (two sentences) | How? (two sentences) | ||
Basically I wanna show my feelings through film. | Basically I wanna show my feelings through film. | ||
Money ( i felt like i am in a bondage and i can’t move that much - i was alive and breathing but no one could see the strings around me) | Money ( i felt like i am in a bondage and i can’t move that much - i was alive and breathing but no one could see the strings around me) | ||
Being censored ( hiding behind a big umbrella) | Being censored ( hiding behind a big umbrella) | ||
Music - when i cant play piano i always feel like there is a string attached to me but no one can see it and it hurts like an ick all the time when i am not around piano or music | Music - when i cant play piano i always feel like there is a string attached to me but no one can see it and it hurts like an ick all the time when i am not around piano or music | ||
Camping - it is like a chiropractic for my soul - i love the pain in my back because of the long hours sitting next to the fire | Camping - it is like a chiropractic for my soul - i love the pain in my back because of the long hours sitting next to the fire | ||
Insecurities - i feel like everyone can see my face changes when i feel my insecurities | Insecurities - i feel like everyone can see my face changes when i feel my insecurities | ||
Poetry ( feeling an empty rectangle in right side of my body ) | Poetry ( feeling an empty rectangle in right side of my body ) | ||
Sports (badminton racket - bouldering shoes - skydiving rig) | Sports (badminton racket - bouldering shoes - skydiving rig) | ||
Social media - I am a very present person, i am present everywhere, in social media, in society | Social media - I am a very present person, i am present everywhere, in social media, in society | ||
I love to express myself in everyway i can | I love to express myself in everyway i can | ||
Being from iran ( feeling too much - feeling a lot of side eyes on me) | Being from iran ( feeling too much - feeling a lot of side eyes on me) | ||
My photos | My photos | ||
My instagram photos | My instagram photos | ||
My youtube | My youtube | ||
My breakfast dishes | My breakfast dishes | ||
My doll | My doll | ||
What is not there? | What is not there? | ||
My books | My books | ||
My desk | My desk | ||
My hair | My hair | ||
My eyeliner | My eyeliner | ||
Script : | |||
this is my room | this is my room | ||
i always try to have something in my room that shows this is sara’s room | i always try to have something in my room that shows this is sara’s room | ||
like this toy | like this toy | ||
or this picture | or this picture | ||
like this plant | like this plant | ||
or this tool | or this tool | ||
i want this room to have something that when it goes missing you can tell that there is something wrong. this is not sara’s room | i want this room to have something that when it goes missing you can tell that there is something wrong. this is not sara’s room | ||
this doesn’t have sara’s identity | this doesn’t have sara’s identity | ||
limitations : | |||
No daylight to shoot | No daylight to shoot | ||
one person filming and editing and recording and writing the script | one person filming and editing and recording and writing the script | ||
Writing a script for a story | Writing a script for a story | ||
Go through all of my twitter bookmarks and read watch and listen to all of them. | Go through all of my twitter bookmarks and read watch and listen to all of them. | ||
Read anything that is related to identity. | Read anything that is related to identity. | ||
Capture all of these and put them together on one surface like the piece from joanna-dead,over and over. | Capture all of these and put them together on one surface like the piece from joanna-dead,over and over. | ||
Get inspired a lot by sunday nobody. | Get inspired a lot by sunday nobody. | ||
Read about people who don have an identity for example. | Read about people who don have an identity for example. | ||
Workflow (two or three sentences) | Workflow (two or three sentences) | ||
Splitting the project into two stages. The first stage is reading/writing the script and making it very clear what I wanna make. Make everything as clear as possible. Write down the shots or feelings or anything involved in the project. | Splitting the project into two stages. The first stage is reading/writing the script and making it very clear what I wanna make. Make everything as clear as possible. Write down the shots or feelings or anything involved in the project. | ||
the second stage is to start shooting and editing at the same time and getting feedback on the project. | the second stage is to start shooting and editing at the same time and getting feedback on the project. | ||
Timetable (Sept 23-July 24) | Timetable (Sept 23-July 24) | ||
Sep - dec : done with the project’s script and idea, make prototypes, present the project proposal in december. | Sep - dec : done with the project’s script and idea, make prototypes, present the project proposal in december. | ||
December - july : shooting and editing. | December - july : shooting and editing. | ||
Relation to previous practice | Relation to previous practice | ||
All I have done till now was related to identity .Identity itself is the body of my practice and I am going into different paths to show any feeling related to identity. I wanna answer the question What is it about identity that i am so obsessed with it? To show my feelings towards it. I come back to it because i want to feel like a person and not lose myself. Have something that represents me. | All I have done till now was related to identity .Identity itself is the body of my practice and I am going into different paths to show any feeling related to identity. I wanna answer the question What is it about identity that i am so obsessed with it? To show my feelings towards it. I come back to it because i want to feel like a person and not lose myself. Have something that represents me. | ||
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Choices made (two sentences) | Choices made (two sentences) | ||
Making everything simple like one element in the picture | Making everything simple like one element in the picture | ||
Working more digitally and not filming | Working more digitally and not filming | ||
Sound design, using very complex sound design for a very simple visual. | |||
(conclude with how people approach concept of identity, how does it function in society?) | # (conclude with how people approach concept of identity, how does it function in society?) | ||
References : | |||
Joanna - dead, over & over | Joanna - dead, over & over | ||
Sunday nobody | Sunday nobody | ||
All you see - niki padidar | All you see - niki padidar | ||
Latest revision as of 23:32, 22 October 2023
Thesis outline
What do you WANT to write? [What will the text be about? (thesis). What do you want to explore?
Storytelling as format like text on practice
how text speaks to the reader: narrative and diary.
Like a story I tell my friends, casual and personal mode of address.
I want to explore my concept of identity and how it can be reduced or added to it to feel a whole. I will go over how I claimed my concept of identity and what inspired me and had an impact on my understanding of it.
How feelings relate to identity, feeling empty or missing.
I will talk about how I find a way to show missing emptiness.
Showing something that is not there by visualizing silence, missing, empty with different visual elements.
what do you want to write?
Be clear about HOW you want to tell your story.]
Outline three key issues you want to explore.
Please think of only 3 key issues.
- First key issue)what is my definition of identity? How do I see it and what inspired me about this topic? What’s out there about it?
- Second key issue ) what i felt and a narrative about how i felt when i could not show part of me that i felt make me and now they were missing.
- Third key issue) reflect on the process i went through to visualize all this and make a film out of it. A photo series a video dairy
How? (two sentences)
Basically I wanna show my feelings through film.
Money ( i felt like i am in a bondage and i can’t move that much - i was alive and breathing but no one could see the strings around me)
Being censored ( hiding behind a big umbrella)
Music - when i cant play piano i always feel like there is a string attached to me but no one can see it and it hurts like an ick all the time when i am not around piano or music
Camping - it is like a chiropractic for my soul - i love the pain in my back because of the long hours sitting next to the fire
Insecurities - i feel like everyone can see my face changes when i feel my insecurities
Poetry ( feeling an empty rectangle in right side of my body )
Sports (badminton racket - bouldering shoes - skydiving rig)
Social media - I am a very present person, i am present everywhere, in social media, in society
I love to express myself in everyway i can
Being from iran ( feeling too much - feeling a lot of side eyes on me)
My photos
My instagram photos
My youtube
My breakfast dishes
My doll
What is not there?
My books
My desk
My hair
My eyeliner
Script :
this is my room
i always try to have something in my room that shows this is sara’s room
like this toy
or this picture
like this plant
or this tool
i want this room to have something that when it goes missing you can tell that there is something wrong. this is not sara’s room
this doesn’t have sara’s identity
limitations :
No daylight to shoot
one person filming and editing and recording and writing the script
Writing a script for a story
Go through all of my twitter bookmarks and read watch and listen to all of them.
Read anything that is related to identity.
Capture all of these and put them together on one surface like the piece from joanna-dead,over and over.
Get inspired a lot by sunday nobody.
Read about people who don have an identity for example.
Workflow (two or three sentences)
Splitting the project into two stages. The first stage is reading/writing the script and making it very clear what I wanna make. Make everything as clear as possible. Write down the shots or feelings or anything involved in the project.
the second stage is to start shooting and editing at the same time and getting feedback on the project.
Timetable (Sept 23-July 24)
Sep - dec : done with the project’s script and idea, make prototypes, present the project proposal in december.
December - july : shooting and editing.
Relation to previous practice
All I have done till now was related to identity .Identity itself is the body of my practice and I am going into different paths to show any feeling related to identity. I wanna answer the question What is it about identity that i am so obsessed with it? To show my feelings towards it. I come back to it because i want to feel like a person and not lose myself. Have something that represents me.
Relation to a larger context
Choices made (two sentences)
Making everything simple like one element in the picture
Working more digitally and not filming
Sound design, using very complex sound design for a very simple visual.
- (conclude with how people approach concept of identity, how does it function in society?)
References :
Joanna - dead, over & over
Sunday nobody
All you see - niki padidar