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- maybe you can give a title for your works, that would help for me to start to read from outside and getting in slowly when I'm reading trough the texts, but then I realised the titles. | - maybe you can give a title for your works, that would help for me to start to read from outside and getting in slowly when I'm reading trough the texts, but then I realised the titles. | ||
-I like your way of writing, clear and gives enough information to understand your projects | |||
-how you describe it, or your answers for the what, how an why questions are realistic and objective, in these texts I really like it that you are using the digital terms and the scientific connections which are related with the projects, for me it's a bit dry, I would love to read more about why did you worked example with drafters, I didn't get your personal part that much | |||
-the way how you write about your projects its consistent | |||
Latest revision as of 13:25, 21 September 2017
notes from Henrietta about Rossella's page:
- maybe you can give a title for your works, that would help for me to start to read from outside and getting in slowly when I'm reading trough the texts, but then I realised the titles.
-I like your way of writing, clear and gives enough information to understand your projects
-how you describe it, or your answers for the what, how an why questions are realistic and objective, in these texts I really like it that you are using the digital terms and the scientific connections which are related with the projects, for me it's a bit dry, I would love to read more about why did you worked example with drafters, I didn't get your personal part that much
-the way how you write about your projects its consistent