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notes from Henrietta about Rossella's page:
notes from Henrietta about Rossella's page:


- maybe you can give a title for your works, that would help for me to start to read from outside and getting in slowly when I'm reading trough the texts
- maybe you can give a title for your works, that would help for me to start to read from outside and getting in slowly when I'm reading trough the texts, but then I realised the titles.
 
-I like your way of writing, clear and gives enough information to understand your projects
 
-how you describe it, or your answers for  the what, how an why questions are realistic and objective, in these texts I really like it that you are using the digital terms and the scientific connections which are related with the projects, for me it's a bit dry, I would love to read more about why did you worked example with drafters, I didn't get your personal part that much
 
-the way how you write about your projects its consistent

Latest revision as of 13:25, 21 September 2017

notes from Henrietta about Rossella's page:

- maybe you can give a title for your works, that would help for me to start to read from outside and getting in slowly when I'm reading trough the texts, but then I realised the titles.

-I like your way of writing, clear and gives enough information to understand your projects

-how you describe it, or your answers for the what, how an why questions are realistic and objective, in these texts I really like it that you are using the digital terms and the scientific connections which are related with the projects, for me it's a bit dry, I would love to read more about why did you worked example with drafters, I didn't get your personal part that much

-the way how you write about your projects its consistent