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Saint Paul??????
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= remember =
= who is remembering =


Follow the protagonist to places where she takes photography with a 35mm.
Follow the protagonist to places where she takes photography with a 35mm.

Revision as of 22:19, 26 September 2019

homemaking

LOCATION: fabric station, Bree

Bree, discovery of: - journal from Leah - this New Life (Dante) from Amelia - recipe books

haircut

Two characters: M & J.

Stake?

What does M want?

- To get a haircut

What does J want?

- To be with company

- To confide <-- that's an action, why does she want to confide? <-- To feel okay by talking to another person

Blocking:

  1. [off screen]J opens door. J offers tea. [lv rm]M browses the books.
  2. [lv rm]M picks a book. Goes about noticing new things.
  3. J enters the living room with tea and snacks. M asks J about the book she has picked out.

More to come

Beginning shots:

Storyboard-scene1.png

Going home from home

J stands in an empty space and recalls the items from her current living room shelf.

I decided to rent an apartment for a few days in the Hague, to have a meaningful birthday and pass some time with intention.

production notes

Jujube/scenes-production-notes

homecoming

SF, London. Various living rooms; dinners and deliberate conversations


Breakfast conversations

I want to use the audio from the conversations in London.

From the bones of lemon to Adam and Eve.

I was able to have these conversations because I was in an extremely comfortable place: a nice kitchen/living room (physical space) and with Nuri (psychological space).

- Transcripts first -- this could be a publication -- but I am seeing shots happening in the photo/video studio as in an epic journey (dramatic lighting and all). I am seeing hands performing: showing lemon seeds and peeling apples.

homecarrying

1. Pitching my tent

LOCATION: Friesland NL?

2. Sören

LOCATION: Southern Sweden

Saint Paul??????

who is remembering

Follow the protagonist to places where she takes photography with a 35mm.

What does she want to remember?

Things of beauty and intrigue:

- winding staircases near Kino

- butterflies

- what are the moments you associate beauty with?

Things with friends -- iconic human connection?

- elaborate dinners

- picnic, smiles

- beach, water, kite

Portrait?

- photo studio

Close-ups:

- looking

- framing

- focus? -- POV?

End scene:

She goes to the darkroom.

Screen goes dark, sound of loading film

Developing (all steps)

When the images emerge:

They are blank.

End scene alternative:

She goes to a vast space.

It's just the camera and her now.

Shots of her taking off the camera.

Shots of her opening the camera.

It's empty.

previously

Jujube/home#genesis