Talk:Alice - Interviewed by hunter: Difference between revisions

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hello hunter

hi steve

NOTES: Write more description of the work.

take a lot of "so"s tons of so's and repetition. take out a lot of words. Change content-wise. itself twice. Unpack architectural could be less vague. Affect in the last sentence not effect. Make it subjective, Is this alice's opinion or should she state it as the world's opinion. wibra is the brand of paint.

Make this the first question: Q "how do you start a painting? cut off the second part of this q as it is in the answer.

next Q. also in the beginning.

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 hi steve
+NOTES:
+Write more description of the work.
+take a lot of "so"s
+tons of so's and repetition. take out a lot of words. Change content-wise. itself twice. Unpack architectural could be less vague.
+Affect in the last sentence not effect. Make it subjective, Is this alice's opinion or should she state it as the world's opinion. wibra is the brand of paint.
+Make this the first question:
+Q "how do you start a painting? cut off the second part of this q as it is in the answer.
+next Q. also in the beginning.