User:Thijshijsijsjss/Human Parser/Notes for a GRS Session

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(Page used for the 2025-03-20 GRS session)

Instructions: Hi :) As Marloes said, line editing would not be the most useful feedback for me at this stage of the thesis. Instead, it would be very valuable to investigate the format of the thesis. As I've now written the core texts, I can start thinking about connecting them and adding sections for cohesion. I will ask you to read a handful of sections in different ways / orders. I'm interested to hear questions / confusions that pop up, associations that you made, confusions that were answered or revisited in a later text, ...

Thank you!


Person 1

Please read the following texts in order:
* /About Navigation
* /About Thijs
* /About This Thesis

Then, read (some of) the following texts in any order of your choosing (please NOT strictly top to bottom):
* /About Manuals
* /About Parsing
* /About Interactive Fiction
* /About Dissociation
* /About Routines
* /About It All Being Connected

I know this is a lot. Don't worry if you can't read it all! Please let me know the order in which you read the texts afterwards :)

Person 2

Please read (some of) the following texts in any order of your choosing (please NOT strictly top to bottom):
* /About Manuals
* /About Parsing
* /About Interactive Fiction
* /About Dissociation
* /About Routines
* /About It All Being Connected

I know this is a lot. Don't worry if you can't read it all! Please let me know the order in which you read the texts afterwards :)

Supervisor:

In my e-mail to the second reader, you have received an 'annotated' version of a manual used in a recent playtest. Neither the manual nor the method of annotation are reflective of what I now think the format should be -- but as we discussed, this is what I had in mind earlier in the project. Please read / browse through this manual and read the annotations as you encounter them. (Or, as you've already read these texts, maybe just a quick look is enough!)